~Starry Night~
The starry night
The gasp of delight
As my lover
Steals upon me.
Passionate kisses.
Unspoken wishes.
Nowhere at all
That I’d rather be.
A night in his company,
Nothing could be better for me,
Please, I beg of you,
Never leave.
(11-18-2008)
With Each "I love You"
She lays her head down
On a teddy bear chest.
He's not there to hold her
So she's not her best.
But the world can be forgiven.
Soon enough it will change.
To feel his arms again
She desperately tries to arrange.
Triumph found; smile renewed.
They share their warmth, affection long due.
Her heart growing lighter
With each "I love you."
(10-18-2009)
Maybe you can comment them here, wonderful, since you lost your writing.com info for the millionth time. And a comment to those of you who aren't my boyfriend is in order I suppose... Um... Dontcha guys like me better when I'm happy? Lol. For two poems written almost a year apart, they're remarkably similar, are they not?
Oh, and, an angry rant on the way for this evening. Byyez.
i like the unintentional rhyme in your last paragraph. =)
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